Went through about 10 pages. Cut about 200 words. Identified 3 problem areas – one more than I originally recalled.
I think the big fight scene at the end is problem area #4, and I think that’s all there are.
…So far, at least. *G*
But all the way through p 111 of a 234 page rough draft, everything is set scene and event wise.
What I’m currently doing is working on small edits (word choice, typos, etc.) farther on in the draft while the plotbunnies chew on the various problem areas I’ve identified. That way I’m still making progress, which reduces the frustration level of “but, but, scenes not done yet!” And that in turn makes it more likely I will get those in-between scenes straightened out. Eventually.
A quote for your amusement: “You want a blessing on this? What, are you expecting a possessed squad car?”
(By this time, Church probably wouldn’t be surprised if there were a possessed patrol car. But she’s actually after something else. 😉 )