Seventeen pages of Seeds of Blood now edited, with little details added here and there. Hopefully good details. 🙂
At this point in the story most of the details are pretty mundane. (Outside of certain accidental fire-setting stuff.) Monster-related details should show up soon, but for the moment our heroes are dealing with preparation for the monsters. Along with a few more mundane threats.
And heh. I’m still finding a word or two to cut here and there; not much, but… well, you never know what will jump out at you from a clean printout.
In case someone wants to give me the fishy eye about innocent trees – well, I end up using the back of drafts to scribble new first drafts. And not all trees are innocent….