River of Stars – Watch der Blinkenlights…

A/N: Whoof, real thunderbumper last night. To anyone getting this weather now, I feel your pain, and take cover.

So, have an extra-long post. 🙂


 

“It could have come by trade from some other world the Goa’uld ignore, like Orban.” Daniel pushed his glasses up thoughtfully. “Which still implies there’s a way to get onto the planet that the Tok’ra haven’t told us about. We really need to talk to these people.”

“I believe you should see the security footage, first.” Hammond hit the projector.

Jack leaned back as the silver splash of a wormhole established shimmered on the screen, followed by a sealed iris, a received GDO code, and the iris retracting-

Sha jumped through first, looking like the winning end of a bar-fight. Grinned, turned – and got tangled up with a pair of pointy-eared, orange-skinned, clawed uglies that leaped through after him. The guards were yelling, and none of the brawlers seemed to care… but at least base security was holding their fire until they got answers. Good for them.

Cho Hakkai fell through next – and wasn’t that a weird thing to see happen to a Tok’ra? His very own ugly dance partner came through a split second later, but that seemed to be just fine, because apparently sometime the Tok’ra and Kwai-Chang Caine had sat down together for tea, and Hakkai owned that alien’s ass, kung fu-style, in about two seconds.

Which was just enough time for Captain Sha to toss one bad guy over his shoulder, pull some kind of staff with a bladed chain out of thin air – say what? – and proceed to start hacking.

Of which might best be said, eww.

Two more uglies, Dr. Genjyo, Goku, and a snake fell through-

“Close the iris!” Sha yelled, slicing uglies Four and Five. Hakkai’s head whipped around, face paling as he saw the snake and knew he wouldn’t get to it in time….

The kid snatched it.

“Could have told him they bite,” Jack grumbled. And felt his jaw drop, at the utter perfection of Genjyo’s shot. “Leftie, huh?”

“Mixed-handed, mostly left. I’d say he’s been shooting with both hands,” Janet agreed, watching the remaining meet-and-greet. “I’ve had all the bodies x-rayed to make sure our lost sheep found all the Goa’uld; Dr. Warner’s going to start autopsies later today. I can already tell you that their DNA profiles are altered human, and have a great deal in common with Goku, Hakkai, and the additions to Captain Sha’s DNA. Only the deceased have claws, and our people apparently don’t.”

“Apparently?” Carter asked, as Daniel frowned and froze the image.

“I haven’t gotten as good a look at their hands as I’d like. They were exhausted,” Janet said plainly. “And Captain Sha specifically warned me, after Sanzo keeled over into bed, not to let anyone try to wake him. ‘Let me or Hakkai do it.'” She winced. “It seems so many people have tried to kill Dr. Genjyo, he’s been known to wake up holding someone at gunpoint.”

“He doesn’t have a gun,” Carter pointed out.

“Which is why Sha’s worried he’ll fall back on Plan B,” Janet said dryly.

“What is Plan B?” Teal’c inquired.

“The captain wouldn’t say,” the doctor replied. “But he looked a little green around the gills thinking about it.”

That from the guy who’d made like a Cuisinart on four living people. Okay. “Daniel?”

“He’s wearing a rakusu,” the archaeologist said, distracted. “At least, I think it’s one. Though they’re usually made out of cloth, not bamboo.”

“And a rakusu is?” Jack asked, before Carter could beat him to the punch.

“Oh. I’m… not exactly an expert on Zen Buddhism. It’s worn by somebody who follows the precepts. Affirm life, be giving, honor the body… I think there are sixteen, I’d have to look it up. But it’s supposed to be a symbol of Buddha’s garments, not armor. Then again, who knows if that’s what it is, or what the Goa’uld did to the faith over the centuries, and given he’s also wearing a kind of kote – armor sleeves – I’m guessing it’s not really pacifistic anymore.”

“Gun was kind of a dead giveaway,” Jack pointed out.

“I carry a gun, Jack. He was on SG-6. Even if it was just for a few days.”

“So he’s armed,” Carter noted. “Does it really matter why?”

“It might.” Daniel pointed at the screen. “Red dot on the forehead?”

“I thought it might be makeup, but he washed his face and it didn’t come off,” Janet nodded.

“And this means?” Jack asked.

“I don’t know. I read the file we have on Shangri-La from the Tok’ra information, and the little SG-6 and 10 were able to send back before the mission… went silent. I’ve started prehistoric digs with more data.” The archaeologist grimaced. “Kanzeon’s founding population seems to have come from across Southeast Asia; I’ve been able to pick out elements of Ancient Korea, Japan, China, and what might be a bit of India mixed in. On modern earth, that’s called a bindi, and it’s worn by Hindu women, usually married. Go back ten or twelve centuries, though, and you find all kinds of people wearing it in ancient China; for beauty, and to protect against demons and evil fortune. And you say they called the variant humans youkai, which is a Japanese word for supernatural creatures…. It’s probably worn by a certain sect, or by someone considered an ascetic master. It could even be a caste mark; he’s wearing white robes, the color of purity and death, and if that gun is local then he has the right to be armed. Fits right in with the warrior or priest-king castes that turn up in a lot of groups with any Indo-European background.”

“So, important guy,” Jack summed up.

“Important, probably adopted guy,” Daniel corrected. “He can’t just go missing. Someone’s going to be looking for him. Maybe a lot of someones.”

Great. Just what they needed; another Tok’ra diplomatic disaster.

“But that’s not what really worries me.” Daniel pointed at the kind-of stole draped across Genjyo’s shoulders. “What do those letters look like to you?”

Like scribbles. What did Daniel think they looked like? But Jack rolled his eyes, and humored the man, peering closer-

Oh. Damn. “Ancient,” Jack breathed. “Way different from what they carved on rocks, but that’s Ancient.” He glanced at Hammond. “Sir, Daniel’s right. We need to talk to these people.”

The general nodded, and glanced at Janet. “Dr. Fraiser. I’ll leave it to your discretion how hard we can safely push; two of them are our people, one is a minor, and a Tok’ra should be an ally. But we need information.” His hands tightened on the edge of the table. “We need to know if there are any other survivors, and if a rescue mission might now be possible.”

And we really need to know, Jack thought grimly, just how a Tok’ra who didn’t know Ra went ka-boom ended up with a GDO.

19 thoughts on “River of Stars – Watch der Blinkenlights…

  1. Well,at least the answer to the GDO is simple. The rest…. here’s hoping they’ll make an exception and let them smoke because it’s slightly better than drinking.

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    1. Let’s hope. Hakkai is Not Happy at SGC regs, no.

      …The smiling ought to be a clue, Jack, run….

      The Sanzo-ikkou have a lot more info about the general SGC than vice-versa. I admit I set that up deliberately. Part of the SGC’s purpose is supposed to be investigating other planets and cultures. Which means, in RL, that eventually you make an assumption, find info that contradicts, and have to decide how to revamp what you thought you knew. SG-1 needs to work on that a bit… so they’re going to. 😉

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  2. Why do I have the feeling that part of the Conflict Ball will be some people assuming that Hakkai knew far more than he was telling about the bad stuff happening or has happened simply because he is a Tok’ra and they have not exactly being endearing themselves to Earth by using humans as pawns? A suspicions / Conflict Ball that certain parties are fully willing to take advantage of to further their own goals. Meanwhile the Sanzo-ikkou gets increasingly annoyed for having to repeat the following:
    “Yes, Hakkai is truthworthy. No, he doesn’t know anything about that nonsense. Of course he’s dangerous! All of us are dangerous! No, he isn’t dangerous to you. Probably. Maybe. If you stop trying to get yourself on his must-die list, it would help.”

    Guys (Jack), watch out for smiling. And the others backing up to avoid getting blood on their shoes. And clothes. Because bloodstains are hard to get out.

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    1. *Cackles* “Maybe.” Indeed.

      The SGC’s being pretty good about not picking up that specific Conflict Ball. It helps that Hakkai tells them some of his story in chapter 2.

      It may also help that Sanzo is deliberately being as snarly as possible without being shot, so Hakkai looks sane and polite and reasonable.

      …Two out of three counts, right?

      But it’s not just the SGC involved, and the Tok’ra High Council… well, they have plenty of their own reasons to stir the pot.

      You do, indeed, wonder how Sanzo’s robes last, given the amount of assassination attempts. They must have special anti-staining technology!

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  3. Urk… the Ancients were on Shangri-La close enough to the time humans moved there for some of them to have working knowledge of Ancient script… and at this rate, probably Ancient tech… and Ni’s got his hands on one of the sutra and who knows else what. Well, it looks like we now know where yokai genes probably are descended from. And Goku… oh boy… that would explain a lot in this mash-up.

    I can’t wait to see SGC’s reaction to finding out that Sanzo is a title, and not a name. And that everyone with the title of Sanzo should probably be on the list of “Shangri-La’s Most Dangerous Humans”.

    And who would be looking for Sanzo… Kanzeon, at least. Although… I’m getting the impression from previous bits that the SGC thinks she’s a System Lord and not a Tok’ra. Which is both right and wrong. So I’m thinking they’re going to flip when they find out that the closest thing Sanzo and Co. have to a boss is a Goa’uld, if an altruistic one. And when the Tok’ra find out about Hakkai’s boss… ooh… fireworks!

    I have to say, I love you posting ficbits here, because then I can respond to them as I go instead of doing just one long response at the end of a chapter. It’s a lot more feasible/manageable for me. 🙂

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    1. You’ve definitely got some of the pieces, there. 😉

      …My bunnies just plastered up a WANTED poster with Sanzo’s image on it, “Shangri-La’s Most Dangerous Human” under the photo. I think they’re amused. 🙂

      Kanzeon would definitely be looking for him. Though she’s quite confident he could smash his way through the whole SGC if he felt so inclined. (She might not be wrong. The Maten Sutra is canonically nasty.)

      Thank you! It lets me get some feedback on what may or may not be working, too, so I can make edits before the final version. 🙂 Much appreciated.

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  4. Checking this site has become part of my morning routine, so long posts are day-making double plus yes. 🙂 I’ve gotten really engrossed in this story particularly: I know I’m going to relish reading it all the way through when you eventually post it in its entirety. (That may sound a little like a subtle update jab, but I’m just genuinely, deadlinelessly looking forward to being able to read the whole thing in a year or two. Gives me the urge to do a little happy wiggle.)

    I rather love how, given the task of assessing Sanzo’s order with Sanzo himself as the only data point, they conclude that, ah, yes, they must be warrior priests. Yep. Obviously. Seems only natural.

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    1. Thank you! This particular story was in storage for a while (try a couple of years!), but I’m hoping to finally get the rest plotted out and written.

      There’s a bit in chapter 7 where SG-1 finally meets a monastery of normal priests. Who are trying to run away, without making it look like they’re running away….

      …Personally, I find it hysterical, but SG-1 is a bit daunted.

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      1. They might also learn why most of the other priests who have tried or think they should be the ones to do Genjyo’s job have had (would have) the life expectancy of lettuce during a locust swarm.

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      2. I quote:

        Random priest: It’s Genjyo Sanzo!
        Everyone except the head priest scatters.

        It’s kind of like being in a OZ base when a Gundam approaches.

        *pictures Sanzo with a Gundam, and winces silently*
        *pictures _Hakkai_ with a Gundam and goes to hide in a very deep bunker*

        😉 tag

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  5. Aargh, bunnies, off! Off I say! Go attack an author who actually finishes the ideas you give them!
    *cough* Eheh, sorry. Just had this thought… Hakkai Winner. Goku Maxwell. Sanzo Yui. Can’t decide which is which of the other two, though.

    Kougaiji Marquise.
    Dammit brain!

    Have I mentioned I love how your stories bring up all sorts of ‘what if’ ideas? ‘Cause I do. 🙂

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  6. @AuthorTAG, don’t the normal monks in Saiyuki chastise Sanzo when they get to know him? He is like the antithesis of their entire order wand what they’ve dedicated their lives too, and *that’s why Kanzeon picked him.* Ouch. Naturally my sympathies are ultimately with His Crankiness, but I can understand why the normal monks and priests are ticked off.

    But I wouldn’t go so far as to say that warrior-monk order isn’t in the cards. After all, Sanzo did inspire one young acolyte to his method of being a Sanzo.

    And how terrible is it that I can never remember Sanzo’s actual name? I can list off everyone else in the Sanzo-ikkoku, but not him.

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    1. *grins* That quote above? That’s pretty much direct from (unfinished) Chp. 7. *is evils*

      And we learn a lot from Jikaku about why Sanzo is so ideal in that role. (Jikaku quite likes Sanzo, both in canon and in RoS.)

      But yes, canon, boy do they chastise him. I loved that arc of the story, with the acolyte, and Sanzo getting fed up with the oh so holy priests and telling them that Koumyou thought they were… idiots, besically. (I’m not at home, so I can’t look up the exact wording in my manga.) Yeah, Sanzo drinks, swears, eats meat, and kills. Everything that Buddhist priests are not supposed to do. About the only thing he does stick to is the celibacy. (Have you read Entanglements yet? I love what Vathara had Gojyo thinking about that in the moth youkai cell….)

      Canon-wise, Sanzo’s original name was Kouryuu (for the river he was found in – can’t remember whether it was the Yangtze or the Yellow River). (This is where the Chinese place names and the Japanese character names can get a bit confusing in Saiyuki.) Just before the attack that killed Koumyou Sanzo and got the Seiten Sutra, he was given the name Genjyo Sanzo. (The 31st of China.)

      In RoS, he was originally Dr. Kouryuu Genjyo. (I guess they didn’t have the story of the Monkey King in the SG-verse. There’s one hilarious story on some Saiyuki archive about how Hakkai knows the story – in the flashback of his childhood he’s shown holding the book Gensomaden Saiyuki – and the Sanbutsushin keeps having to erase his memory when he’s brought before them for judgement. 😉 I think they end up having to try doing the session eight times.) Koumyou clearly kept his personal name for his apprentice, and then used his surname as his priesthood name.

      Who, me? Like Saiyuki to the point of knowing everything I can? Whatever gave you that idea? 😉

      🙂 tag

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  7. Wasn’t Sharak pretty similar to our favorite Sanzo priest? Aside that she had a sense of humor? Just imagine if they met her first, affirming that yes, they are warrior priests- THEN they met the normal ones. Who all ran for cover at the first chance.

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    1. So I’ve heard, about Sharak. 🙂 I haven’t actually had the chance to read those, yet. Why can they not put these out as manga that I can buy, instead of only available as scanlations that I have to read at the library ’cause the adstreams give my home comp hiccups….

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